tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post5823649525650962939..comments2023-11-05T04:01:12.146-05:00Comments on Ad Aged: Hemingway does powerpoint.george tannenbaumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10974259094860905139noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post-9754311068825111072012-10-10T10:24:13.580-04:002012-10-10T10:24:13.580-04:00Jon, great job!
I guess you've been around the...Jon, great job!<br />I guess you've been around the block a bit.george tannenbaumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10974259094860905139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post-44001389786561793422012-10-10T10:06:32.669-04:002012-10-10T10:06:32.669-04:00Looks good! A few notes:
- We'll need a slide...Looks good! A few notes:<br /><br />- We'll need a slide outlining meeting objectives and goals. Be sure to include the client "ask" and next steps<br />- Try to tie it all back to our work to date. Use Jack London's deck from last year.<br />- Slide 3 is kind of long. Can we lose some of that language? Also, not sure client will get the foreign language.<br />- Slide 5: "Sad" is kind of vague. Can we tie this back to Q3 objectives?<br />- Slides 7 - 8 come off as negative. Can we reword to make it more positive (something like "Sail in need of updating" -- just a suggestion, I'm sure you can make this better!)<br />- We need a summary slide at the end.jonlewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13032048975162178128noreply@blogger.com