tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post5022765829570027904..comments2023-11-05T04:01:12.146-05:00Comments on Ad Aged: Learning to write.george tannenbaumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10974259094860905139noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post-8310277587837236262012-11-12T10:31:29.396-05:002012-11-12T10:31:29.396-05:00I think what you write applies to designers and ar...I think what you write applies to designers and art directors as well. Include clients and planners and account people and we may be getting somewhere.Justinmtdphttp://www.titrain.com/sunforce-39305-650-watt-high-efficiency-polycrystalline-solar-power-kit/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post-49115752687148420542012-11-03T08:12:10.757-04:002012-11-03T08:12:10.757-04:00I read a sentence that stopped me in my tracks yes...I read a sentence that stopped me in my tracks yesterday.<br />It was the last line of the chapter:<br />"Just then the alto sax jumped on the tune's tailgate for a long slow ride."dave trottnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post-26637710597329333242012-11-02T18:24:36.383-04:002012-11-02T18:24:36.383-04:00I think what you write applies to designers and ar...I think what you write applies to designers and art directors as well. Include clients and planners and account people and we may be getting somewhere.Tore Claessonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04978163002830730401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post-40908735684396544932012-11-02T16:46:52.539-04:002012-11-02T16:46:52.539-04:00I noticed that too. I forgave it because of this: ...I noticed that too. I forgave it because of this: "...one of those marble, you-bet-you-will chins..."george tannenbaumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10974259094860905139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072420181476584961.post-46922212952091873782012-11-02T16:34:16.359-04:002012-11-02T16:34:16.359-04:00But the first sentence is missing a verb.But the first sentence is missing a verb.BOB HOFFMANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05158827977385952634noreply@blogger.com